you can fly so high
keep your gaze upon the sky
i'll be praying every step along the way
even though it breaks my heart
to know we'll be so far apart
i love you too much to make you stay
baby, fly away
("fly away" - corrinne may)
very good angle, im glad you challenged yourself to create a piece using this kinda angle. it's really hard to pull off.
i have a few suggestions: the first thing i noticed was the shading. to me, each "ring" should get a little darker as they get closer to you, you can get a good sense of depth that way. also, the moss on the bottom left seems a little out of dimension. maybe touch that up a little and you'll be set.
i love the little guy on the bottom right! that could be a piece by itself.
thank you! i'm terrible with shading. i think the little flyers are also supposed to be darker, but as they get higher up. i don't know if i can stand working on this piece anymore, but will keep that in mind for the next one. ^^ if you could gimme some tips on proportions, i'd love that too!